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Another Serial Experiments Lain fanart. This time I'm quite proud of myself even though it looks pretty shite. Lineart looked crap, then I made it look good, now it looks even more crap. You decide.
Comments and Crit's please! 1 worded comment don't help at all.
Lain Iwakura/Serial Experiments Lain © Ryutaro Nakamura
Artwork © me
Comments and Crit's please! 1 worded comment don't help at all.
Lain Iwakura/Serial Experiments Lain © Ryutaro Nakamura
Artwork © me
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© 2005 - 2024 Genocidebb-Shadow
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Ok, since you asked, an honest critique.
Line-art is fine. I'm not sure what the function of that big black U-shaped object is (or whether I like it). Also, the tower seems to suffer from a transparency error (you can partly see the wires thru it).
Otherwise, great work! The idea of two shifted Lains works very well; and her eyes are a good find, too. I also like that her blouse appears to be somewhat in disarray: it's fits her chaotic/unstable state.
Line-art is fine. I'm not sure what the function of that big black U-shaped object is (or whether I like it). Also, the tower seems to suffer from a transparency error (you can partly see the wires thru it).
Otherwise, great work! The idea of two shifted Lains works very well; and her eyes are a good find, too. I also like that her blouse appears to be somewhat in disarray: it's fits her chaotic/unstable state.